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It’s not much, not much at all, but I just couldn’t face putting up another goose egg in the word count today.

While I normally put in a lot of  internal links to previous, related posts here, I won’t be doing that for what I hope will be this year’s thirty NaNoWriMo posts. If you have jumped into or stumbled onto this story in mid-adventure, there are plenty of other ways to navigate around the site to find previous installments. Actually doing so is left as an exercise to the student.

CHAPTER SEVEN

Pawley knew that he had to get some sleep, but knowing was not doing. It was everyone’s first reaction to the crisis to put in twenty-two hour days and be moving like a banshee throughout all of them. Yet, while that might make people feel more accomplished and involved in the short run, in the long run it wouldn’t solve a thing if people started making serious mistakes due to sleep deprivation. Out here, with hard vacuum and radiation around nearly every corner, mistakes killed people; bad mistakes killed hundreds of people.

With resources as limited as they were, and a trained and experienced work force being a key resource of which they had massive shortages, those were events that had to be avoided at all costs.

It was amazing how much had been done from the ground, at least in LEO and GEO. The orbital infrastructure which met so many needs of those down on Earth was in many ways just an extension of the industrial machine below. Now that the wheels had fallen off that machine and the orbital assets were trying to survive on their own, that major fault in the system was obvious.

Pawley was meeting constantly with the leaders of the larger stations and representatives of the smaller ones. His message from the top down was very clear. As a group, everyone on orbit and off planet needed to pull off a herculean task. But if it was a war against the universe, a race against time, then the race was a marathon, not a sprint.

Several leaders of other stations had urged Draconian restrictions immediately on anything deemed unnecessary for survival. Pawley and the rest of the Council had made sure that didn’t happen. There would be restrictions, but they would be balanced against the need for people to have a reason to live instead of just a command to live.

The biggest immediate point of contention had been the video and information systems. All of the hard-liners had recommended that it be shut down completely. Their reasoning was two-fold.

First, workers getting home after an eighteen or twenty hour day didn’t need to watch some fluffy piece of entertainment. It was felt if anyone had time to spend on simply being entertained, something better could be found for them to utilize that time.

Secondly, with subsistence level conditions for the foreseeable future, it was thought that most people just needed to focus on what they had to be doing and not “wasting” their time getting news and updates from all over the system. There was a movement in the leadership to make all information available only on a need to know basis.

Pawley, Gonzalez, and Squires, who were being called the “Unholy Trio” behind their backs, got together with their respective station AIs and went through the predicted consequences of that policy. It didn’t sit well with any of them and they were relieved to find that the projections from the AIs gave weight to those gut feelings.

Realizing that they would only get one chance to get it right, policies were put into place to make information available to everyone about issues at both a local, in-station level and a global, system-wide level. Nothing would be hidden or swept under the rug. If the system was going to collapse and kill everyone, at least everyone would have the option of knowing as much about what was happening as they chose.

The reality was that someone working double shifts with no days off, whether they were processing regolith at a station on the moon, tending crops at an aerofarm on O’Neill, working basic maintenance at Goddard, or piloting a cargo shuttle between LEO and GEO, no one had much time to do much more than glance at the headlines. But it was enormously comforting to most to know the information was there if they needed more and that nothing was being withheld.

Day Thirteen — as in, the day after Day Twelve, which should have been the day after Day Eleven, but you wouldn’t know it from here.

A stupid error, a typo, not the end of the world, but it is a good indication of how NaNoWriMo can push you to the edge if you’re already busy and stressed for time and then have to somehow find time to write every day. Sleep is often a casualty. While it’s macho and cool and attitudinal to say things like, “Plenty of time to sleep when I’m dead!” or “Sleep is for the weak and sickly!” the fact is, if you’re not a twenty-four-year-old Navy SEAL, going from seven or eight hours of sleep a night to five or six hours a night, every night for a month, is grueling.

Earlier this evening, the eyes were really heavy, the chair was comfortable, and that lying little voice was saying, “Just a little nap, you’ll feel so much better. Just until 9, right?” But as you’re nodding off and your head is bobbing like one of those glass ducks that keeps dipping into the water, you realize that “just until 9” probably means either 9 AM tomorrow morning or 9PM tomorrow night.

That’s not going to get it done. It’s a marathon. This might not be “THE wall” that you hit, but it’s definitely “A wall.”

A very important time to remember what it’s like running that last 2+ kilometers of the marathon, the finish line ahead of you, and the clock ticking…

Then you get your butt out of the comfy chair (“They NEVER expect the Spanish Inquisition!”) and in front of the computer and you write some more. Maybe not 3,000 words, 1,700 words, or even 1,000 words. But you write.

While I normally put in a lot of  internal links to previous, related posts here, I won’t be doing that for what I hope will be this year’s thirty NaNoWriMo posts. If you have jumped into or stumbled onto this story in mid-adventure, there are plenty of other ways to navigate around the site to find previous installments. Actually doing so is left as an exercise to the student.

CHAPTER SIX (continued)

On the way toward Saturn six months earlier, the observation area had been the most popular area on the ship. When they left Ceres it had faded to just another pinpoint in just a few days. Heading uphill away from the sun it was dark and lovely, a dark sky that no one on Earth had ever dreamed of. Not even the night sky of Farside Station on the moon could compare to this.

But ultimately, it was just stars. Billions of crystal clear pinpoints right down to the limits of resolution for the human eye, some showing a touch of color, some smoky smudges trying to resolve themselves into ghostly nebulae – but stars.

Then one of them began to get brighter, a little bit more each day, before resolving into a lopsided blob accompanied by a few other bright points of light that moved near the bright blob. As Saturn grew, and grew, and grew, the view from the blister on the rocky outer skin of Cronus was breathtaking.

But like its bigger brother Jupiter, Saturn held onto some incredible forces in her magnetic fields and radiation belts. An order of magnitude less than the killing power of Jupiter, Saturn had plenty of areas that dictated the building of Cronus out of a small asteroid, the thick, rocky shell and stores of water acting as a shield to protect the crew inside.

Once Cronus had started orbiting Saturn deep inside the system of moons, all access to the observation area had ended. On the original flight plan it would have stayed that way until Cronus left to return to Ceres. But the original flight plan had been scrapped.

With the swing out past Titan and near Enceladus, Cronus was away from the worst of Saturn’s radiation belts. There were occasional outbursts as plasma streams from coronal mass ejections interacted with Saturn’s magnetic field at the magnetopause. However, with care, the observation areas could be used safely.

Alsby, Tanaka, and Doctor Anderson worked out a system which allowed small groups to go out for an hour at a time. As if they were going swimming in dangerous waters, a buddy system was set up. Radiation exposures were closely monitored.

The view of Saturn was worth the small risk. Appearing over ten times as large as the Moon seen from the Earth, the banded yellow disk of Saturn surrounded by her broad, glittering rings was indescribable to anyone who hadn’t seen it with their own eyes.

Cronus had launched the Titan probes from a point over half a million kilometers from the cold, smoggy planet, but that was still close enough for the enigmatic moon to be clearly seen as the ship looped outward toward Iapetus. The other larger moons could be clearly seen as small disks or crescents near the rings, while some of the dozens of tiny moons could be spotted as moving pinpoints.

Drifting in the bubble of windows, one foot loosely hooked through an anchor loop, Alsby soaked up the view. It was often hard for her to express why she wanted to be out here doing this and why she had fought so hard to get command of Cronus and the Saturn Exploration Mission. She was not a poet or an artist, but this view, this unparalleled splendor – it was a major factor in what drove her. She liked being out on the edge of the known.

Her “bubble buddy”, Doctor Anderson, floated next to her, intently scanning the rings with a large pair of binoculars. Alsby didn’t know what she was looking for. Finally Anderson pulled them away from her eyes and attached them to a sticky patch on the back wall.

“You had something you wanted to talk about, Doctor?” Alsby asked quietly, breaking the silence.

“Couldn’t we just be here to enjoy our allotted R&R time? Does there have to be an ulterior motive?”

“There doesn’t have to be. But I’ll bet there is, right?”

Anderson signed. “Fine, yes, there is. Am I really that transparent?”

“Subtlety is not your strong suit, but it serves you well in your position, so don’t worry about it, Cheryl. What did you need?”

“I just wanted to put a bug in your ear about some minor rumblings in the crew. Not everyone’s thrilled to be looking at six or more years out here instead of three.”

“I don’t blame them,” Alsby said, “but they all knew that it was a contingency, and it was possible long before we ever had any of these problems on Earth. The cause of our need to stay blindsided us, but not the existence of a Plan B.”

“No, and what I’m seeing and hearing is minor, nothing to get too worried about, but I thought you should know.”

“I know there are confidentiality issues, but can you give me any hints? Better yet, do you have any suggestions on how to make the situation better?”

“I think the biggest thing you could do would be to take a look on the regulations regarding advanced personal relationships.”

Alsby snorted. “All of this is about Ben and Betty? They found twin cabins down by engineering a month after we headed out and everyone this side of the asteroid belt knows what’s going on down there.”

“It’s more than that. You’re right, Ben and Betty are a cute couple and their discreet disregard for those particular regulations is the worst kept secret on the ship. But you also have more and more people who are bending the rules a little bit more every day. The situation has changed; perhaps the regs should be changed as well.”

“Changed how? You know there’s a reason that those regs are there. We’re forty-nine people trapped in a can stuck inside a rock for three years. The last thing we need is a couple breaking up in an ugly way, or some third wheel deciding they’re not happy being the one who’s not happy.”

“But you just said it yourself, Susan. We’re not stuck here for three years, we’re stuck here for at least six. Maybe nine. Maybe find that to keep things running a few people have to stay here until the next ship comes. It was one thing for everyone to figure they could cope for three years by using dedication to the mission and some masturbation on the side. Now some people are thinking a little differently.

“We can’t just chuck those rules out, Cheryl, you know that. We don’t get to pick and choose the regulations we like.”

“So said the woman who has Todd and SaSEM plotting trajectories and laying out building plans, plans which Ceres isn’t supposed to know about just yet.”

“Guilty!” laughed Alsby. “So rules may be adjusted as deemed necessary, especially on a ship two billion kilometers from the nearest human settlement. It sounds like you’ve given this some thought, so spill it. What’s your suggestion?”

“Trust your crew. They’re the best of the best, all highly motivated, all focused on the mission goals. They’re also all human and under enough pressure to make diamonds. Work with them to figure out what can work and what still has to be out of bounds. Set up definite expectations of what is expected and what is forbidden when inevitably someone breaks up and they still have to work together.”

“What you’re suggesting really has us heading off into uncharted territory, Cheryl. I don’t know that any crew has ever done this. It might be for a good reason.”

“I don’t know that any crew has ever faced these kinds of circumstances, at least, not a crew this big. You’ve said that we have to take risks to change our exploration schedule, go to places we weren’t expected to go, and now build a station from scratch somewhere out here? If the situation is drastic and warrants those technological and engineering risks, then it might also warrant the social risks.”

“I’ll take that under serious consideration, Doctor. I think you may be right, but we’ll need to take these changes as carefully as we have the schedule and planning changes.”

“Thanks, Susan. I’ll be ready to work with you on this, to do whatever you need. The crew’s health is my job and I think this is now going to be critical to keeping them sane. We’re not just crew any more, we’re more like pioneers or settlers, like it or not.”

A chime sounded. “Our time here’s up,” said Alsby. “By the way, who is it that you’re bending the regulations with, Cheryl?”

Anderson looked at Alsby, surprised, but not bothering to deny the accusation. “I guess I really am that transparent. It’s Mark, from Life Support. Sorry, I guess I’m only human as well.”

“Not to worry, we’ll see what can be done to make some adjustments before everyone starts talking about you and Mark the way they talk about Ben and Betty. Plus, you’re not nearly so alliterative as a couple as they are.”

This really is not going to get ‘er done! Obviously.

It’s a marathon, not a sprint, but I feel like it’s one where I’m having serious leg cramps or some other problem and we’re not even at the equivalent of the five-mile marker. In any marathon there is a maximum time allowed (usually seven or eight hours, maybe less) and if you can’t finish by then, you don’t get a time and they open up the roads and go home, leaving you out on the course. (It’s not quite that harsh, but in a big race like LA, SF, NYC, or Boston, they will scoop you up as a straggler and put you on a bus to the finish line.)

Here there’s also a deadline and a time, and while there are still eighteen days to go, at this point I’ll barely make the halfway point. But I’m not giving up, I just have to find a way somehow to juggle some priorities and free up some time. There have been a few “curve balls” this year, some really good, some not so good, and they of necessity have booted NaNoWriMo off of the top of the priority list.

Like that runner with cramps falling way off the target time and watching the buses creeping up from behind, I need to suck it up and make it happen. It won’t be the end of the world if I don’t make it, but it will be disappointing to not hit that personal goal.

We’ll see.

While I normally put in a lot of  internal links to previous, related posts here, I won’t be doing that for what I hope will be this year’s thirty NaNoWriMo posts. If you have jumped into or stumbled onto this story in mid-adventure, there are plenty of other ways to navigate around the site to find previous installments. Actually doing so is left as an exercise to the student.

CHAPTER SIX (continued)

 

That’s more like it.

While I normally put in a lot of  internal links to previous, related posts here, I won’t be doing that for what I hope will be this year’s thirty NaNoWriMo posts. If you have jumped into or stumbled onto this story in mid-adventure, there are plenty of other ways to navigate around the site to find previous installments. Actually doing so is left as an exercise to the student.

CHAPTER FIVE

“Put them up on the wall as they connect, please.”

Immediately two windows opened up, showing meeting rooms on the LEO Terminus and on O’Neill. In a few seconds, two more windows opened, connecting everyone to Goddard and Tranquility. In each view were the commanders and chief executives of the respective stations and colonies.

“Ladies and gentlemen,” Pawley started, looking at everyone in the four windows, “we all know each other. We’ve all worked together for years, sometimes decades. We all trust each other. Now we’re all going to have to act together to save ourselves, depending on each other for our mutual survival.

“Our time has run out. You all have the information on the contamination and deaths on SpaceChem Echo. We’ve looked at this possible situation ever since it became clear that the AHF crisis on Earth was getting out of control. The time is here for us to act if we are to survive and avoid being dragged down with them. I am proposing that we immediately implement our Emergency Plan to cut ourselves off from Earth.”

He stopped and waited for the responses. After the usual three-second delay, there were various looks of resignation, sorrow, and exhaustion, but no one appeared to be surprised or shocked. Heads that weren’t bowed under the weight of the decision were nodding in agreement.

“Mike, you know that this only buys us a little bit of time,” said the Goddard Chief Executive. “We can declare independence all day long but we can’t survive independently. All of us still rely on Earth for at least some of our food, materials, and manufactured goods, especially the high tech equipment. None of us are a closed loop ecosystem.”

“Ari, that’s true, as it’s always been,” said the O’Neill COO, “but it’s also true that there are no other options at this point. We quite literally have no choice other than to take our chances on making ourselves self-sufficient. We can buy ourselves as many months or years as we can, or we can die from this disease in days or weeks. Our only chance is to unite and face the fact that we’re on our own.”

“Within only a few weeks there won’t be anyone left down on Earth with the capability to send anything to us anyway,” said the Tranquility Chief Executive. “The number of shipments has dwindled to a trickle already and now we can’t trust the supplies we’re getting anyway. I don’t know if we’re in better shape or worse than the poor bastards on the ground, but at least we get to face our problems head on. Well, we’ll have that option as long as we don’t allow their disease to contaminate us.”

“Very well then, I move that we proceed immediately,” Pawley said. “Are there any final comments or objections? We need your official agreement or disagreement for the record.”

“I agree,” said Ari Gonzalez, Chief Executive from Goddard. “God help us, we’re going to need it.”

“I agree,” said Ken Squires, COO of O’Neill.

“I agree,” said Klaus Schwiger, Chief Executive from Tranquility. “We’re caught between a rock and a hard place.”

“I agree,” said Alexa Garcia, LEO Terminus Station commander. “It’s going to get ugly here quickly. The best defense is a good offense.”

“That makes the current vote five in favor and none opposed,” said Pawley. He leaned forward and looked directly into the camera on his desk. “Pavel and Anya, Jean, I’m sorry that we haven’t had time to include you in the preliminary discussions, but obviously things are happening very quickly here. Please review what we’ve just discussed and join us immediately with any comments for the record, as well as your votes. We’ll keep the discussion going here while we wait for your reply.”

Pawley leaned back in his chair. “DEBBIE, what’s the delay time to Mars and Ceres?”

“Commander Pawley, the round-trip delay to Mars is currently twenty-two minutes and ten seconds. The round-trip delay to Ceres is twenty-seven minutes and five seconds.”

“Thank you.” Pawley looked back at the four open windows on his wall. “Let’s assume for the moment that this will be unanimous. We have an immediate situation to take care of with the infected crew that’s trying to get into SpaceChem Delta. Sarah, what do we need to do and Neil, how do we do it?”

“There’s no way that we can allow that crew onto another station,” said Sarah. “It won’t save them, and it will doom at least seventy-five percent of the people on the newly infected station. Their only option is to go back down to land somewhere on Earth, but I don’t know what the details of that option might be.”

“The pod they’re in does have re-entry capability,” Neil said, “although they might have limited options for where to land if the ground-based guidance systems are starting to fail. The pod will have emergency backup procedures to land autonomously at a major spaceport, or it can soft land by parachute if everything else fails.”

“Do we know who exactly the survivors are and where they’re from?” asked Alexa. “If we can give them some reasonable options it will be easier to deal with them.”

“The three crew members onboard the pod are all from the United States,” said DEBBIE. “Florida, Maryland, and Kansas are listed as the home addresses for their closest family.”

“So there are your options,” said Ken. “Send them in to Brownsville, White Sands, or Topeka, which will give them emergency abort options that will land them east of the Rockies somewhere. They survived the outbreak in their station so they’re likely to be immune. Knowing that, they can deal with the situation on the ground as best they can.”

“And what if they don’t agree to go down?” Amanda asked. “The fact that they went to Delta instead of simply going down to begin with indicates that they either are totally panicked and irrational now, or they just don’t care about the regulations now that they’re the ones who could die as a result.”

“That’s not an option for them,” Neil said. “They can go down or they can face the consequences. If they try anything that might spread this outbreak, we will have to stop them, by the deployment of force if necessary.”

“Do you have that capability at either GEO or LEO?” asked Klaus. “If you’re going to start a war, you shouldn’t be bluffing.”

“We’re not starting a war. Everyone talks about this as if it is some kind of military action,” Amanda said. “It’s critical that we keep in mind the fundamental difference between military actions and police actions. Police actions are taken by society against internal threats in order to protect the members of that society. Military actions are taken against outside threats. Police actions are taken to protect, and should be undertaken with the goal of using minimal force to inflict minimal damage and casualties. Military actions are taken to defend, and often involve significant or maximum amounts of both force and damage. None of us will survive a military action, which would involve our colonies and stations fighting against Earth or against each other. Police actions may regrettably be necessary in order to protect us all from internal cancers.”

“I stand corrected, my apologies,” said Klaus in the awkward silence that followed. “But the question remains. Can we stop them if they won’t obey the order to go down?”

Neil considered his response for a few seconds, before simply saying, “Yes, we believe we can. We’ll see.”

“Anything else before we tackle this one?” Pawley asked. “No, okay, Sarah and Neil, you’re we me on this one. Everyone else, please stand by and monitor, if you have anything to add, send it through DEBBIE. DEBBIE, please put us in contact with the rogue pod that’s docked at SpaceChem Delta.”

As DEBBIE made the connections, the four open windows on the wall diminished in size and a large window opened next to them. In a second a picture flickered to life there, showing a cramped cabin and three people wearing jumpsuits. They hadn’t even taken the time to grab pressure suits.

“Escape pod crew, this is Michael Pawley from GEO. I’m here with Sarah Teffeau, the GEO Surgeon General and other staff. I understand that there has been an emergency and an AHF outbreak at Echo. Can you tell us what happened?”

The three occupants of the pod turned around in the air and pulled themselves in front of the control panel where the comm unit was located. The man and two women looked sweaty and flushed, but otherwise healthy. The older woman with her hair pulled back in a long pony tail answered.

“GEO, this is Marybeth Sullivan of SpaceChem Echo station. The three of us are the last survivors of Echo after the quarantine protocols were breached. We need help. Everyone back on Echo is dead, they won’t let us in here on Delta.”

“Marybeth, this is Sarah, I’m a doctor. Do any of you have any AHF symptoms or other medical problems?”

“No ma’am, we’re all okay.”

“But all of you were exposed to AHF back on Echo? How do you know that’s what it was? What happened to the rest of your crewmates?”

“They’re all dead, like I said, we’re the only survivors. I can confirm that all fifteen were dead and showed every sign of it being AHF, the symptoms matched all of the ones described in the news from Earth.”

“Marybeth, do you know how you got exposed?” Pawley asked. “Were all of the protocols for disinfection and isolation followed?”

“I don’t know, none of us were involved with taking care of the supplies from the new shipment. The guys who did that are dead. I just know that the drone docked, they did what they had to to get it opened up, and an hour or two later everyone started to vomit and choke, running a high fever, then convulsions and bleeding, then they were dead.”

“So you were directly exposed?” asked Sarah.

“Yeah, it’s a small station, just eighteen of us. Of course we were all exposed.”

There was a pause as the three GEO leaders glanced at each other, silently calculating who was going to take the discussion next.

“Marybeth,” said Pawley, “are you familiar with the current regulations regarding your situation? Has SpaceChem kept you all up to date on how a situation like this needs to be handled from here?”

“Not really, we’re techs and engineers, not pilots. Davis and Gurney would have been the people on Echo to handle that, but they’re dead. The guys we’ve been talking to here at Delta won’t open the hatch, but they haven’t told us why. It’s getting us pretty pissed  to tell you the truth.”

“Marybeth,” said Sarah, “I’ll be blunt. You’ve been exposed to AHF. The three of you appear to be in the minority, people that have a natural immunity. It’s  just like how some people don’t get a cold or the flu when it’s going around and everyone else gets it. But you’re AHF carriers now, even if it’s not making you sick. You have the virus and will spread it to anyone you come in contact with. The crew on Delta won’t open the hatch because almost all of them will die if they do. You will kill them.”

There was a stunned silence from the escape pod. As he realized what their situation was, the man in the pod began to get angry, banging his fist against a wall panel, an action that sent him spinning backwards across the cabin. His outburst shook the two woman out of their shock and they pushed off to grab and restrain him, screaming at him to get his attention. Slowly the situation calmed.

“Commander Pawley,” DEBBIE said quietly, “a message from Pavel Levieva and Anya Kapoor is coming in.”

“Record and hold it, DEBBIE.”

“Yes, sir.”

Marybeth was back at the comm panel, trying hard to stay calm. “So the disease didn’t kill us but now you’re just going to let us die here, is that it? Isn’t there any place where we can be cleaned, decontaminated, sterilized, or whatever? There have got to be other options.”

“There are no facilities on orbit that can handle you, Marybeth,” Pawley said. “That’s why the quarantine and isolation restrictions have been so strict. There is one option you have. The escape pod you’re in has re-entry capability. We can control it and put you down somewhere in central North America.”

“You’re kidding,” Marybeth said. “Right? You’ve seen what it’s like down there! Everyone’s dying, everything’s falling apart. They’re starving, rioting, it’s total chaos. That’s a death sentence too!”

“Not necessarily,” Pawley said. “Things are bad there, but you’re immune to AHF, you’ve been exposed and survived. You have a lot of technical skills that they’re going to need down there to rebuild. We can get you down and then it’s up to you to find a way to survive, but at least it’s not an immediate death sentence.”

“What are the other options?” Marybeth asked.

“There are none,” Neil said. “The situation is cut and dried, I’m afraid. You can not be allowed to stay on orbit where you are an immediate danger to anyone and everyone you come in contact with. You must go planetside immediately.”

“And if we don’t?” Marybeth’s angry crewmate asked.

“You have nowhere else to go. Delta’s not going to let you in. If you try to go someplace else, they will not let you in. If you try to do something irrational that puts others in danger, we will stop you. That will probably result in your deaths. You need to think this through, calm down, and head to the ground to take your best shot. I’m sorry, but there isn’t any other way.”

The three survivors pulled away from the comm panel of the pod  and could be seen huddled in conversation. It didn’t look like a calm conversation. Finally Marybeth came back over, leaving her two companions still in an agitated discussion.

“So we go down and maybe die tomorrow or later, or we stay up here and die today? You don’t give us much choice, do you? What do we need to do to land? None of us are pilots.”

There was an audible sigh of relief in the GEO office. No one had wanted their first act as an independent government to be an execution.

“You need to turn over control of your pod to one of our AIs,” Pawley said. “They’ll work with you to figure out the best place to put you down and how to time it to give you whatever advantages we can. Then they’ll fly your pod remotely. Are you ready to do that?”

“Not really, but we’ll do it anyway.”

“DEBBIE, will you please take over and do as I’ve described? If you have any questions or if anything needs to be handled at this end, please refer it to Neil. Marybeth, good luck to you and your crew.”

The conversation cut off.

“Commander Pawley,” DEBBIE said, “a message from Jean Duris is coming in.”

“Good. Is everyone else still there?” The four other windows expanded to show their various offices and meeting rooms, all still occupied by the other colony and station leaders and their staffs.

“DEBBIE, give us the messages, the ones from Pavel and Anya first.”

A fifth, sixth, and seventh windows opened, two with still images and the third showing a tiny, cramped office with a pair of old and weathered men seated at a tiny desk.

“We have nothing to add from Bradbury. So far things are still calm here, but we agree completely with Ari. None of us are living in a closed loop environment. Without resupply from Earth, it’s just a matter of time before we crash and burn. That’s got to be our first and top priority. But we’ve talked about that. I agree that we have to proceed. Levieva out.”

The image in that window froze and the next one came to life. “We agree with you at Heinlein, we have no choice but to proceed. Kapoor, out.” She never had been one for long speeches.

The final window started showing its message, originating in what looked like a cave of some sort. “Mike, Alexa, Ari, Klaus, and Ken, you all of course have my agreement that we’re on our own now and we must act accordingly. Let’s not screw it up, it’s awfully cold and dark out here, a miserable place to starve to death. Ceres, out.”

There was a pause as everyone on the conference call looked at one another, weighing what they had just done.

“Let’s do it, Mike,” said Ari. “You’re the boss now. Tell the troops what we’re doing. It’s time to get it done or die trying. Someone stole our safety net, so we’re going to have to make do.”

“DEBBIE,” Pawley said, “set up a broadcast to all stations and colonies as well as the various Earth headquarters locations that we’re still in contact with. We’ll start in ten minutes. Meanwhile, first I think I need to go throw up.”

I’m thinking (or feeling, which might be more important) that the reason this story is limping along like a Ferrari with seven blown cylinders is that I have yet to allow myself to relax, cut loose, and let it flow. (Anyone making the obvious constipation jokes will be sent to the corner for a timeout.)

Last year’s story was a wild ride, and I had been thinking (a 45-minute commute each way to the hanger is a great time to think) that it was because last year’s story was a comedy where this year is a drama. But it just occurs to me that last year’s story was just as much of a drama as this one, no comedy. It’s the other story (the still-being-worked-on 2012 NaNoWriMo story) that’s turning into a wackadoodle comedy.

So why the difference? I thought I had it, but apparently not. Could it be that last year’s story was “fun” and totally “fantasy-ish” while still being set in our current world? It did allow me to throw out any off the wall BS I could come up with, at least to a certain extent. Where this story is more “hard” science fiction, precise, serious.

Who know? Perhaps I should cut off the paralysis by analysis and relax, cut loose, and let it flow.

While I normally put in a lot of  internal links to previous, related posts here, I won’t be doing that for what I hope will be this year’s thirty NaNoWriMo posts. If you have jumped into or stumbled onto this story in mid-adventure, there are plenty of other ways to navigate around the site to find previous installments. Actually doing so is left as an exercise to the student.

CHAPTER FOUR (continued)

Neil Hermans was the first one to get there. He hadn’t been running – that would have been a good way to get people even more nervous than they already were. But he hadn’t been taking his time either.

“Hello, Neil. You got the latest news?” asked Pawley.

“Yeah, DEBBIE gave it to me on the way over. It looks like we’re going out of the frying pan and into the fire, whether we like it or not.”

“I don’t know that we can do anything about the fire, but for the moment let’s just try to stay here in the frying pan for a while. But this could get ugly really quickly if people start to lose it. We’re going to head that off fast and hard. Are you and your crew ready?”

“Obviously not, but we’ll do the best we can with what little we have. We do have a couple of aces to play if it comes to that, but everyone’s worked really hard for two hundred years to make sure that no one can do what we’re going to need to do.”

“Don’t underestimate the damage you might do if you pull one of those aces out of your sleeve,” said Amanda as she came in and sat down in the office’s last chair. “People up here have always been a different breed than the ground pounders, but there are certain lines that have never been crossed. Neil’s right about how much has work and thought has gone into keeping us weapons free. That’s Pandora’s Box that you’ll be opening.”

“I remember,” said Pawley. “We’ve gone over this. But if push comes to shove, that could be the lesser of the two evils.”

“It’s still evil,” said Sarah.

“Now that we’ve beaten that horse again, what options do we actually have if we need them?”

Neil sighed. “If it’s a single small ship or even a handful of them that are the problem, we can probably take action against them with a reasonable chance of success. But that will only be for a day or two after we first have to use force. The element of surprise will be a huge part of our plans. Once everyone knows that we’re serious and will act, maybe it will get them to stop doing things that might leave us with no other good options. And if it’s dozens of ships, things can fall apart pretty fast.”

“Worst case, if we lose all control here in GEO and LEO, what happens if anyone tries to get to O’Neill, Goddard, or one of the other colonies? Can they defend themselves to keep their isolation intact?”

“We’re not privy to any preparations they might be making,” Neil said, “but my assumption would be that they’re making them. An awful lot of what we do out here involves manipulating huge amounts of energy very carefully, which is a good first-order approximation for the definition of a weapon.”

“Right,” Pawley said. “While we have to be prepared for the worst case scenario, we also have to do everything we can to keep everyone working toward a best case scenario, even when ‘best’ might be a purely relative term. We always believe that we’re a cut above and won’t give in to panic like they have down below, but that’s an ideal that is rarely tested up here. There are no guarantees that it will always be the case when individuals are looking at choices between bad and very bad.”

“DEBBIE, what are the current estimates from the AI strategy team showing about our longevity if we isolate ourselves?”

“Commander Pawley, given our current resources for materials, personnel, energy, and manufacturing, the best estimate is that there is less than a three percent chance of being able to successfully transition to a fully independent society free of all physical contact with Earth. The most likely outcome will allow most colonies to survive less than ten years, while statistically a few may last twice that long.”

“DEBBIE, what are the estimates of our ability to survive exposure to the current disease if we maintain contact with Earth?”

“Commander Pawley, given the updated information coming from the SpaceChem Echo station, any system of stations that attempt to continue physical interactions with spacecraft from Earth will be destroyed in less than a year. However, that point is moot since it is estimated that no ground-based institutions will be able to maintain the capability of launching spacecraft or cargo for more than another six weeks.”

“It’s the same math as it’s been for the past six months,” Amanda said. “We can die from disease in a month or we can die from starvation and hypoxia in a year.”

“Or we can get our asses in gear and at least go down fighting,” Neil said. “But we’re going to have to do it as a group. The survival forecasting models all make the assumption that all of the colonies, stations, and ships work together for their mutual benefit. It’s suicide to fracture apart and split up into individual efforts.”

“But everyone knows that,” said Sarah. “So far we’ve managed to not have any major institutional rivalries off-Earth. We’ve got a history of cooperation.”

“No,” said Pawley, “we have a history of being able to staying out of each other’s way, while all being subsidized by different ground-based economies. While the different energy, manufacturing, and tourist companies have all had their own cooperation and competition agreements, for the most part everyone knows that we’re all in an unforgiving environment to begin with. One way or the other, we’re all living in glass houses, so we don’t throw many rocks. But look at the early competition to get to the moon, and then the international issues with GEO slots once they became the first rare commodity up here.”

“True,” said Amanda, “but nothing like that has happened in over forty years, despite the occasional spat or pissing contest.”

“It might take a lot longer than forty years to forget a hundred thousand years of aggression,” said Neil. “I hope we can do it, not like we have any choice.”

“Commander, the other Council members are coming online,” DEBBIE said.

One thing I’ve noticed in several of the long-form writing efforts that I’ve tried is that I get two or three good chapters of dialog and action, and then go completely off into left field by throwing in a chapter of 100% exposition, before going back to actual storytelling. I’m not sure if it’s impatience or laziness (or a little of both), but the next draft has to fix it every time.

“Show, don’t tell,” is the standard instruction. You need to be able to craft your story to fill in whatever background you need by making it a part of the ongoing story, not by setting aside the story for a chapter and then jumping back in.

But now that I’ve done that scene and that scene to set the stage and I need to get to that scene to move the story along from here, we’ll finish our awkward chapter of exposition, while silently mulling over ideas on how to fix it in the next draft. Re-write it as several new scenes/chapters to do a more thorough job of laying the foundation for the story while simultaneously not being long winded and boring? Or drop it completely and rework everything else in the entire book to fill in background as it’s needed?

LATE EDIT: Oh, the hell with it. Later on (maybe after NaNoWriMo, or do I have to do it now?) I’ll rewrite the first half of this chapter to not be all expository and introduce new characters. Let’s make what was supposed to be the second half of Chapter Three into Chapter Four and do it right. Or at least, better. (That tapping sound you hear is my muse, over in the corner of my brain, giving me “The Look”, arms folded, glaring, tapping her foot impatiently. Yes, ma’am. I’m writing now, ma’am. Yes, I know better, your worshipfulness. I’ll do this part correctly, your wonderfulness.)

LATER EDIT: Yeah, this will work. Not many actual words tonight, with the introduction of new characters, places, and situations, it was slow going tonight, not many words, but a lot of structural stuff in my own head, knowing what needs to come next (acting out all of that exposition crap), so it should start coming more easily after this. I hope.

While I normally put in a lot of  internal links to previous, related posts here, I won’t be doing that for what I hope will be this year’s thirty NaNoWriMo posts. If you have jumped into or stumbled onto this story in mid-adventure, there are plenty of other ways to navigate around the site to find previous installments. Actually doing so is left as an exercise to the student.

CHAPTER FOUR

“Commander Pawley, Doctor Teffeau needs to talk to you,” DEBBIE said. “She says it’s extremely urgent.”

“Put her through.”

“She’s on her way to see you now. She’ll be there in three minutes.”

That can’t be good, Pawley thought. “Okay, send her in when she gets here. Hold everything else unless it’s an actual emergency.”

“Yes, sir. Doctor Teffeau in, everything else on hold.”

Pawley quickly went through all of the files and windows open on his screen and saved, closed, forwarded, or deleted as needed. If the Surgeon General was coming here personally to give him news, it might be a while before he got back to any of the more routine things.

With a brief knock on the door, she strode in lightly and sat down in a chair across from his desk. The look on her face verified Pawley’s suspicions about the nature of her visit.

“We’ve got our first infestation,” Teffeau said without preamble, “a LEO maintenance & fuel depot run by SpaceChem, SpaceChem Echo. It looks like they just got a supply ship in and something in it was contaminated.”

“What happened to the quarantine protocols? How did the virus get past those?”

“Best guess is that the protocols weren’t followed to the letter. We knew that this would happen. It doesn’t matter how bad the news is from down below, or how untrustworthy and slipshod the decon work at Quito, Nanyuki, and Bontang is getting. You can put procedures in place until you’re blue in the face, but sooner or later someone’s going to be bored, or in a hurry, or absentminded, and the shit’s going to hit the fan. Today’s that day.”

“How many people are on that station?” Pawley asked.

“Eighteen, and it’s ‘were on,’ not ‘are on.’”

“They all died?”

“No, just fifteen of them. The other three weren’t showing symptoms so they panicked and got into a pod, abandoned the station.”

“Please tell me they went down.”

“With all of the news reports showing what’s going on down there? They went to another SpaceChem station.”

“In direct violation of the most basic rule we have for this situation. What in hell were they thinking? They know that no one will let them dock and contaminate themselves. Wait, no one let them dock, right?”

“Yes and no,” Teffeau said. “SpaceChem Delta told them to stand off and wait for instructions, but when they couldn’t raise anyone on the ground, they let them dock. But they’ve got the hatches still sealed, so now they’re asking us for help and instructions.”

“You said they couldn’t raise anyone at SpaceChem for instructions. Why not? DEBBIE, can you please get in touch with SpaceChem for me?”

“Working on that, Commander Pawley.”

“We’ve talked about this, Mike,” Teffau said. “The outer system AIs called it when the India and Pakistan thing blew up. All of the big, strategy-oriented systems are out there, but none of the human strategists here have disagreed. I know it sucks to be the one with your finger on the button, but it’s time to cut the cord, while we can.”

Pawley sat silently for a few seconds, staring absently at the wall, lost in thought. “DEBBIE, any luck getting anyone at SpaceChem?” he finally asked.

“No, sir. There are no responses through their normal communications channels. I have attempted to contact the AI at their primary processing facility in Indonesia, but those communications lines appear to be down as well. I am hearing from other, smaller AIs in the region that there are large civil disturbances throughout the area.”

“Thank you. DEBBIE, please send the information that Doctor Teffeau just gave to me to the other members of the Council. Tell them that I’m calling an emergency session for one hour from now, all need to be online. Then tell Amanda and Neil that I need to see them immediately.”

“Yes sir, sending those messages. Stand by. Amanda Louise and Neil Hermans are en route to your office.”

While I normally put in a lot of  internal links to previous, related posts here, I won’t be doing that for what I hope will be this year’s thirty NaNoWriMo posts. If you have jumped into or stumbled onto this story in mid-adventure, there are plenty of other ways to navigate around the site to find previous installments. Actually doing so is left as an exercise to the student.

Sooooooooo sleepy. Good thing that a keyboard isn’t considered “heavy equipment,” if you know what I mean.

CHAPTER THREE

Over the next week the news reports and images coming from Earth got progressively worse. The march of the Airborne Hemorrhagic Fever through humanity’s ranks continued unabated, the geometric increase in casualties surging past anyone’s ability to keep count. What AHF didn’t kill, desperate, panicked survivors did.

In the industrialized world, overnight transportation from anywhere to anywhere led to the spread of the virus to every major city on the planet in less than three months. The governments couldn’t get ahead of the crisis. When they shut down air travel, the virus was spread by refugees traveling in cars. When they declared martial law and shut down the highways, people fled infected areas on foot across the countryside, with nothing but the clothes on their backs and what they could carry.

The systems that held society together began collapsing. When global transport was shut down, companies started to fail. Unemployment reached historical highs. When interstate travel was shut down, the food stopped flowing to the cities.

Hospitals, police, and fire departments found themselves to be the first decimated. They were the first exposed en masse to AHF, the first to discover the 80% fatality rate of the disease, and the first to realize how hopeless this battle might be.

Even those with jobs stopped going to work. The millions to be made in the stock market weren’t worth the risk of being exposed to a four-in-five chance of death, which would almost certainly doom your family as well. Schools closed, stores closed, factories closed. Everyone was shocked by how quickly the only people on the street were the military and the looters.

Martial law was declared worldwide, with varying degrees of enforcement success. In some regions it was ignored and the military itself disintegrated as nearly everyone went home to their families in a frantic scramble to find some place safe. In other countries, the situation actually stabilized, the military being able to restore order, set up basic systems for distributing food and aid, and conscripting those it needed as necessary to maintain the ranks.

In underdeveloped countries, where there was little to no global travel to bring infections in, there was a delay before the first AHF cases were seen in some locales. Everyone shut their borders and hunkered down. But it only took one or two infected carriers to accidentally break the quarantine.

Once quarantine was broken, the crowded and impoverished conditions in many third world cities were like gasoline-soaked tinder, waiting for the spark from the first AHF carrier. With a more densely packed population with fewer opportunities to flee or hide, the death rates soared to astronomical heights.

A few places were able to isolate themselves thoroughly enough and wipe out the few existing outbreaks so aggressively that they got on top of the crisis, and then tried to stay there. Living on an island was an advantage, which the Wellington and Reykjavik governments leveraged, mercilessly enforcing their isolationism with extreme and immediate force. Basic principles of human rights were abandoned in favor of survival at all costs. It was totalitarian to the extreme, but the “New Zealand strategy” worked better than anything else did.

Researchers around the world worked ceaselessly to try to find a vaccine or a cure for AHF. They were hampered by the way the virus could mutate quickly, retaining its virulence while dodging all attempts to find a weak spot that could stop it. More nimble than the flu virus in branching into dozens of different strains, more deadly than the previous century’s Ebola virus had ever become, AHF was not playing by the old rules.

Those who survived the battle with AHF were both treasured by researchers and feared by the public. Even though they had recovered, were they still contagious? Could they be re-infected by a new strain of AHF, or did they now have immunity? What about people who had clearly been exposed, often repeatedly, but had never come down with the disease? Was there a common link between those naturally immune, and could it be utilized and passed on to others?

The unusual and unique nature of the AHF virus and the speed at which it had initially spread led to an endless stream of unsubstantiated rumors. The most common was some variation on the idea that AHF was an engineered virus, created in a secret lab by terrorists and deliberately spread to kill as many as possible. The problem with the rumor was that no group had ever taken credit for such a horrific act, and there was no biological evidence to support the theory.

Others were convinced that aliens, monsters, or God had decided to wipe out Mankind. Prayer didn’t prove to be any protection against AHF, nor did Ouija boards

With the entire world cracking at the seams, the Pakistan-India war could have been a knockout blow. But because the whole world was already locked into isolationist hysteria, the immediate effects were not felt worldwide. The invasion of infected refugees from Pakistan into India shattered the fragile equilibrium which the Indian government had fought so hard to maintain. The casualties skyrocketed on the subcontinent, but it made little difference to the rest of the world. They all had their hands full with their own crises.